雅思大作文写作方法

雅思大作文写作方法

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雅思大作文写作方法+常用表达

6 大作文task2

6.1雅思大作文评分标准细则

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雅思大作文写作方法

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雅思大作文评分标准细则

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雅思大作文写作方法

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6分：文章切题，语句通顺，没有明显错误（小错在6个以内），有一些比较不错的语句（复杂句、排比、倒装、从句等等）就是6分的标准了。

7分：文笔流畅，错误极少，有个别闪光点就是7分。

8分：论点新颖、别具一格，就是8分。或者论点一般，但十分切题，语言很漂亮，令人印象深刻。也是8分（不过一般这样也可以给7分）。

6.2 5～9分范文

范例6-1

The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been suggested that the government should take action on the violent films and televisions which posed the violent crimes in society .The implication and

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【Abby阿布整理】雅思大作文写作方法+常用表达 Abby阿布留留学/315487 ———————————————————————————————————————— veracity of this idea seem reasonable but in fact require closer examination.

First of all, the course of the increasing of the crux of the violent crimes is not the violent films and televisions. The major reason is that the big gap between the poor and the rich and with people’s moral character as well. As I see it, the governments are obligated to develop the economy and the consciousness.

In addition, if forbid the violence in films and on televisions, we will lose some excellent films, because to some action films, the quintessential part is violence and therefore, it is no benefit for neither film extent or culture.

What’s more, violent films and televisions are good negative examples, for it gives people fears who commit violent crimes .A boy in my class, who has a fiery temper, often fights with others, Once he saw a violent film of a crippled actor because of the violence, he was worried and had a lesson on it which effects him a lot, finally he became a disciplined boy.

For these reasons I feel strongly that the film of violence should not be controlled and that we should objectively evaluate and criticize the issue , because we need different films and televisions, so we can learn something from them. (245words) 得分：５分

文章结构清晰，是一篇５段式的作文，但是在第４段中，作者其实是论述了与前两段不同的观点，但用的连接词却是what’s more使得这段的真正意图没有体现出来。

从语言方面来说，似乎文章用了一些好词，如implication and veracity, crux, be obligated to等等，但是仍然有些低级的语法错误，如if forbid the violence in films and on televisions这个句子是没有主语的句子，是非常严重的错误，给考官的印象非常的不好。 其次，很明显，文章单词等级的跳跃性很大，第一段用的词都不较高级别，而第３段的词句很简单而且有严重的错误。

此外，由于文章的词数也没有达到最低要求，导致失分。

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范例6-2

Some people think the function of university education is to prepare students for their future employment. However, others believe that it must have other important functions. Discuss and indicate what other functions the university education can provide.

Some hold that the function of university or college education is to help students to get ready for their future paying-job. While others consider that the use of university or college education is more than the mere function. As far as I am concerned, university must have other important functions in many aspects.

There is no doubt that we go to university to improve our skills and ability on coping with the things that would happen in our future job. But on campus it is not the only function. Because university is not only the place only to study in but is a part of society where we could learn how to communicate with each other and develop ourselves’ personality.

Whichever universities or colleges are in the world are composed with people and buildings. They are just like a small society and we can take advantage of them to make friends with all kinds and backgrounds. How we could keep the friendship is one of function we should learn in the university before we go to the true society to hunt our career. Therefore, one of the functions of university education is that we could enlarge our relationship in the university.

Honest is also another function that we could learn in the university or college. Before we take the exam, we have to promise that we will not cheating during detest and when someone is caught for cheating, he (or she) will be punished strictly. Honest is one of the basic principles for each person.

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