初三英语书面表达范文

北京卷

中考真题

根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于 60 词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并淡谈你的感受。

Hi! Liu Jing，

My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself．He says the bus service in Beijing is very good now，and people can go anywhere by bus．Is he right? Can you tell me something more about it?

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．

Yours，

Tony

Hi! Tony，

I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing．_______

If you have more questions，please ask me．

Yours，

Liu Jing

名师解析

1．试题解读

这则书面表达要求考生写一则回信，内容涉及北京良好的公交服务。公交服务与考生日常生活息息相关，故该写作任务所涉及的写作内容具体，只要平时稍作留意应会有所了解。动手写作时能详细加以表达。但写作要求中不仅涉及介绍，还涉及谈论感受，故考生应注意表达内容全面，不可遗漏要点，所表达观点尽量有自己的独特性，这样才能在数篇中考作文中脱颖而出。

2．写作信息要点

① 回信的基本客套语；

② 介绍北京良好的公交服务；

③ 谈论自己对北京公交服务的看法。

3．可用素材

(1) 词汇：

bus service，excellent，seat，environment，wait for a bus，tickets，cheap，good manners，take，bus lines，spend

(2) 句式：

① It's right that your grandpa says that the bus service in Beijing is very good now．

② It's true that the bus service in Beijing is very good now．

③ There is no trouble for your grandpa to go anywhere in Beijing．

④ There are bus lines all over．

⑤ I believe your grandpa will enjoy our good bus service here．

4．注意事项

(1) 写回信应对来信中所提及的问题有针对性地进行回答，不可避重就轻；

(2) 注意正确使用信件的格式；

(3) 介绍北京良好的公交服务应为本文的重点写作内容；

(4) 注意避免表达的语言平淡化。

满分文展示 1

Dear Tony，

I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing．

(①What your grandpa say is right．)The bus service in Beijing is now really very good．(②As a matter of fact，buses play an important role in our daily life．)(③It's very convenient to travel everywhere because there are bus lines all over，even to villages．)There are bus stops here and there，so you needn't wait for a long time．What's more，the tickets are very cheap．(④The drivers are not only good at driving but also kind to passengers．)

I really enjoy taking a bus here．(⑤It's so comfortable here．)

If you have more questions，please ask me．

Yours，

Liu Jing

旁批

① What your grandpa says 在句中为一个主语从句，属于语法高级结构。

② As a matter of fact 在句中起过渡作用，后面的 play an important role 表示“充当重要角色”，是一个高级词汇。

③ 这是一个主从复合句，其中 it's convenient to do 句型表示“做某事是方便的”。属于高级表达方式。

④ 该句中使用了 not only... but also... 结构，该结构的使用，使表达尤为简洁明了。

⑤ 此处是一个 so... that... 引导的结果状语从句，表明了作者的观点和态度。 标准范文

Dear Tony，

I'm glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing．

Your grandpa is right．The bus service in Beijing is really good now．There are bus lines all over．Buses can even take you to a small village．Besides，special seats are offered on buses．People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap．

I like taking a bus because I think it's comfortable and also good for the environment．So it's a good choice for your grandpa to travel by bus in Beijing． If you have more questions，please ask me．

Yours，

Liu Jing

中考真题

回想三年的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的印象。请你以“What should we do in English class?”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。

提示：(1) Listen to the teacher．

(2) Take part in activities．

(3) Be confident in ourselves．

要求：(1) 文稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

(2) 文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

(3) 词数：60 ～ 80 个。

参考词汇：take notes，work in groups with...，not be afraid of...

What should we do in English class?

In English class，we should ______

名师解析

1．试题解读

本文为提纲式说明文体裁。文章要求学生就“在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效”这一话题谈一下自己的具体想法。此话题与学生生活紧紧相关，因此在写作时，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，就能写出一篇内容丰富的文章；同时要注意文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确。

2．写作信息要点

① 学生要做到课上认真听讲。

② 学生要积极参加课堂活动。

③ 学生应该保持自信的态度。

标准范文

What should we do in English class?

In English class，we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary．Try to answer questions in English．

We should take part in all kinds of activities，like reading，writing，having discussions and playing games．We need to work in groups with our classmates to help each other and learn from each other．

It's very important to be confident．Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes．In this way，we can make much progress．

中考真题

假定你叫张华，最近你从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下：

表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等；

感到担忧：造成环境污染等；

希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。

注意：1．词数 80 ～ 100；

2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；

名师解析

1．试题解读

这是一种半开放的题型：美国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂，自己既欢喜又担忧，同时还要求了解有关环保措施及更多信息。对于此类文章， …… 此处隐藏：22090字，全部文档内容请下载后查看。喜欢就下载吧 ……