（完整版）英语长难句基本句型分析(4)

relevant respect, extremists of this kind think that animals lie outside the area of moral choice.

[句子主干]Arguing from the view that every relevant respect译成\各相关方面\，不要把respect 译成\尊

重\；extremists为极端主义者；let outside the area of moral choice译成\不在 道德范围内，不关乎道德\。

20．When that action, an instinct that should be encouraged rather than laughed at.

[句子主干]When that instinct that should be…

[语法难点]以冒号为界，将全句分成两个复合句。前面的复合句里，时间状语从句when

that action不能译成\在行动中\，而译成\在起作用\，action

在此是\作用，性能\的意思；翻译被动语态时，使用\得到\，\遭到\等，使译文流畅 自然

21．The Aswan Dam, for example stopped the Nile flooding but deprived Egypt of the fertile silt that floods left - all in return for a giant reservoir of disease which is now so full of silt that it barely generates electricity .

[句子主干]The Aswan Dam, …stopped the Nile flooding…but…

[语法难点]有插入语。for example是个插入结构，不是句子的主要成分。but后面省 略了the Aswan Dam。注意so…that…结构，是\如此……以至于\的意思。 [句子翻译] 以阿斯旺大坝为例，它挡住了尼罗河的洪水，但也使埃及失去了洪水冲 积的肥沃土壤，换回来的却是一个病态的大水库。现在水库积满泥沙，几乎不能用于

发电了。

[翻译技巧]the Nile是尼罗河。All in return意思是\换回来的全部则是\。 22．The trouble is that part of the recent acceleration is due to the usual rebound that occurs at this point in a business cycle, and so is not conclusiv evidence of a revival in the underlying trend.

[句子主干]The trouble is that…is due to …, and so is not …

[语法难点]有套和从句。the trouble is that…是表语从句结构。后一个that引导 的是修饰rebound的定语从句。

[句子翻译] 问题在于，近期的增长一定程度上是因为商业运作周期涨落的结果，因 此还不能得出经济已经呈现复苏态势这一结论。

[翻译技巧]part of the recent acceleration不可译为\一部分的最近的加速\，而 是\最近加速部分是由于\。business cycle是指\商业周期\。

23．New ways of organizing the workplace all that reengineering and downsizing - are only one contribution to the overall productivity of an economy, which is driven by many other factors such as joint investment in equipment and machinery, new technology, and investment in education and training. [句子主干]New ways of …workplace…are only one contribution to…, which is…, and…

[语法难点]有插入语。两个破折号中间的成分为插入结构，可以视为括号里面的内容 。Such as后面的内容是对many other factors的列举。在阅读的时候基本可以跳过 不看，除非后面有细节题考查这里的内容。

[句子翻译] 组织工作场所的新方法--包括机构重组和缩小规模--只是促进某个经济 实体的综合生产率提高的一项措施，还有其他许多因素促进生产率的提高，比如对机 械设备的联合投资、采用新技术、对教育培训投资等。

[翻译技巧]all that译为\这一切包括\。overall productivity译为\综合生产力水

平\。Joint investment译为\联合投资\。Drive译为\驱动\。

24．His colleague, Michael Beer, says that far too many companies a mechanistic fashion, chopping out costs without giving sufficient thought to long term profitability.

[句子主干]His colleague,…, says that… ,chopping out costs without giving …

[语法难点]有省略。chopping out costs without giving sufficient …分句是非 限定性定语从句。修饰的是前一分句的整体意思。without后面要跟现在分词giving 。

[句子翻译] 他的同时迈克尔·比尔说，为数众多的公司以简单机械的方式进行机构重组，降低了成本，但却未能充分考虑长期赢利。

[翻译技巧]far too many译为\太多的（比实际需要）\。re-engineering in a mechanistic

fashion应译为\以简单机械的方式\。chop out译为\削减\。