高二英语作文专题训练

高二英语作文专题训练

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2010年央视春晚的广告收入创新高，但节目中的植入广告引发了热议。最近，某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚植入广告的态度”的调查，请根据以下饼图（pie chart）所示信息用英语写一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。

注意：

1．对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

2．词数150左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3．植入广告：product placement

Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.

The opinions on this topic vary from person to person. One in four think there is so much of product placement that lots of people feel unsatisfied when they watch the programmes. And 10% of the people think product placement in the programmes greatly ruins the image of CCTV, beause it will leave a bad impression on audience in and outside China. Besides, nearly one third of the people hold the opinion that it’s hard to relate the product placement to the programmes, making the audience feel uncomfortable.

However, there are 15% of the people who think it is helpful for the development of CCTV. And the rest think there is no need for us to be so strict with product placement. After all, it’s very natural.

Personally, the product placement is really disgusting and CCTV should try to avoid it.

本文总体结构非常清晰，作者通过整合拼图，谈论对待广告的两大观点，最后陈述自己的观点，除此之外，作者在选词造句上也下了一番工夫。在开头，中间以及最后的结尾处，优美、地道的句式层出不穷，一些高级词汇相互响应，熠熠生辉，值得其他学生借鉴。

The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.

According to the pie chart, we can see 15% of the surveyed people think it’s difficult to develop CCTV without the product placement, because it can provide enough money. At the same time, 20% of them think the product placement is presented in the progamme in a natural way.

On the other hand, the rest of the people are against the move and they have their own reasons. Nearly one third of them say the product placement has little to do with the programmes, which reduces their interests in the programmes. And 10% of the people hold the idea that the disadvantage that it ruins the image of CCTV outweighs its advantage. Besides, a quarter complain there are too much product placement in the programmes.

As far as I’m concerned, even if it’s common to see product placement, I don’t think it should appear in some programmes of art and culture.

本文反映出作者对英文写作极强的驾驭能力，首先作者能够很好地审题，通过图表找准信息，并且将文章结构安排地很合理，让读者一目了然，再次，作者在语言方面极具天赋，从开始的一个without的强调句，到非限制性定语从句，及后来 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.

As is shown in the pie chart, 20% of the people surveyed think it acceptable, for the product placement appears in the programmes naturally. And 15% of them consider it necessary for CCTV to make money from product placement, which is of great benefit to the development of CCTV itself.

However, among the people surveyed, more than one third of them complain that the product placement has nothing to do with the programmes. 25% of them even feel hurt seeing so much of it. Furthermore, the rest 10% hold the view that great harm has been done to the image of CCTV.

From the chart we can draw a conclusion that most of the people surveyed are against product placement in the programmes. In my opinion, product placement nowadays is almost unavoidable, but it should not damage the art of the show and should take the audience’s feelings into account.

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你班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客”的讨论。请你根据下表提

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.

A small part of the students approve of it for the reason that on one hand, this punishment can decrease the amount of the traffic accidents. On the other hand, it can improve the safety of passengers and drivers. Besides, avoiding riding in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only responsible for us, but also for the driver and pedestrians.

However, the majority of the students are strongly against this punishment in that they think it hard for passengers to judge whether the driver has drunk or not. What’s more, even the passengers know the driver has drunk, if the driver doesn’t accept their advice, it’s unfair to punish the passengers.

Personally, I think people who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished because the public’s safety is the most important.

作者分三个段落来完成此篇书面表达，先说明少数人赞成的观点，接着说明多数人反对的观点，最后给出作者自己的观点，并说明理由。结构紧凑，要点全面，

作者观点鲜明，理由具有说服力。文章中作者使用了大量的高级词汇和高级结构，为文章增添了色彩。on one hand, on the other hand, besides, however, what’s more, personally等过渡词增强了文章的流畅性。

’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.

The minority of the students who are for the idea think that it can reduce traffic accidents and promote the safety of traffic. They also think avoiding taking a car driven by a drunken driver is an activity responsible for passengers and the driver and other people on the road as well.

On the contrary, the majority of the students are opposed to it. The first reason they give lies in that passengers have difficulty finding whether a driver is drunken. Apart from that, even if passengers know that the driver is drunken, it is unfair to …… 此处隐藏：23361字，全部文档内容请下载后查看。喜欢就下载吧 ……