2._正反对比作文

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议论文__正反观点对比

基础写作：请根据以下的写作内容， 使用5个规范的英语句子描述 全部所给的信息内容.

写作内容 作为一个中学生, 你肯定经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. 请你根据提示内容, 简要概述中学生普遍存在的对考试失败的两种 态度, 并结合自身实际, 说明你的观点.

态度一: 当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力. 态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败的原因, 鼓励 自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。

你的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ……

审题体裁: 议论文 时态: 现在时 人称: 第一人称 要点: (1) 我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成 功, 也遭遇过失败. (2) 态度一: 当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪 低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力. (3)态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败 的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同 样的错。 (4)我的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ……

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正反 观点 对比 类的 文章

不同观点对比

说明自己观点

文章结构(1)我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. 对考试失败大致有两种态度. (2) 态度一: 当考试结果不尽人 意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力. (3)态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析 找出失败的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。 (4)我的观点: 失败乃成功之 母, … 提出问题

不同观 点对比

说明自 己观点

句型短语(1) 我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. 对考试失败大致有两种态度.

have/take many tests or exams do well in the exams achieve success suffer from failure, fail (in) the exams take different attitudes towards… there be different attitudes towards

句型短语(2) 态度一: 当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪低落, 丧 失信心, 不再继续努力.

be in low spirits have passive attitudes lose heart/confidenceno longer study hard ; no longer try one’s best …

(3)态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败 的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同 样的错。find out/ analyze the causes, encourage oneself have/take active attitudes build up self-confidence,

avoid making the same mistake

句型短语(4)你的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ……

in my view / opinion, As for me, … As far as I am concerned, I (formly) agree with… Failure is the mother of success.

表示不同观点的套语

总起:Different people hold different pinions. People have taken different attitudes towards … People have different opinions on this problem.

不同观点之间的衔接:On the contrary, others hold a different view.

However, each coin has two sides.On the other hand, people object that ….

比较、对比However,/

but on the other hand, on the contrary, unlike … be different from …,

We middle school students have had many tests or exams and have both achieved success and suffered from failure, but different students take different attitudes to failure. Some fall in low spirits when they don’t do well in the exams, losing heart and no longer studying as hard as before. However, most students take an active attitude towards failure. By encouraging themselves to be self-confident, they find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.

In my opinion, failure is the mother of success, which can teach us a lot in the process of reaching our goals, and only by tasting failure can we enjoy the fruit of success.

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