新东方BEC中级--写作课程电子版教材

新东方BEC中级写作

BEC中级写作电子讲义

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第一讲 BEC写作概述

本课程安排简介

写作共6次课，第1次讲概述。

BEC写作简介：

1 写作目的与要求

1 Can make notes that are useful to both him/herself and to colleagues.

2 Can write most letters he/she is likely to be asked to do; such errors as occur will not prevent understanding of the message. 3 Can write a simple report.

写作考试共进行45分钟，占总成绩的25%，小作文占10分，大作文占20分。 更多的报名信息和成绩查询方法请上网了解：http://doc.guandang.net 教育部考试中心

2 测试范围与选材

1、身份介绍 (Personal Identification)

2、 工作环境与日常事务 (The office，general business，environment and routine) 3、接待与闲暇活动 (Entertainment of clients，free time，relationships with colleagues and clients) 4、商务旅行 (Travel) 5、健康 (Health)

6、购买与销售 (Buying and selling)

7、公司结构、系统及程序 (Company structures，systems，processes)

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8、产品与服务 (Products and services) 9、成果与成就 (Results and achievements)

其外，还会涉及其他的一般商务话题（Business issues）。 3 测试题型分析

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题型： 1．商务便条类； 2．商务便函类；3．商务书信类；4. 商务报告类

注意：BEC不是单纯的英语考试，也不是考察商务知识。 对策：学习、模仿高水平的论文

例题解析：

You work for a company which produces laser printers．You are visiting another company，

Softcell, to buy some computer software for your department．They have expressed an interest in your company‘s printers and you would like to take twenty brochures and three sample printers with you．

相关词汇：laser, inkjet, projector (Barco), photocopier (Xerox), fax machine, scanner, computer, monitor

相关词汇：company literature; brochure; leaflet; flyer; white book; data sheet; prospectus

Write a short note to Mr. Jim Asano，the Sales Manager．

Asking for his permission to take these items． Explaining why you want them．

Mentioning the time and date when you want to collect them． Write 40-50 words on your Answer Sheet.

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便函便条类题目的结构

Input(已知信息): situation description

Task（任务）: memo（备忘录 比note长，严肃，正式用语）, note（便条）, email content points（3个内容点） Write: internal message (40-50 words)

注意：格式；发挥部分要确切

评分标准

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注意：content; accuracy; conciseness

【例题】

Christmas is coming. Your company is going to hold the annual Christmas party. As the secretary

of the general manager, you help arrange the preparation for it. Write a memo to all employees.

Announcing the planned party. Welcoming all employees to join it. Introducing the programs of it.

Mention the time and place that it takes place. Write 40—50 words on your Answer Sheet．

商务书信类

这一题型要求考生根据所提供的短文，如书信、传真、便函、留言条(电话留言条)等，起草一封书信，字数要求达到120—140词左右。 题目结构：

Input: 1 situation description 2 task

3 target reader

Reading: texts in note, letter, fax, memo + content points (handwritten notes; second letter) Write: business letter (120-140 words) 注意英美拼写问题 【例题】

You have organised a production conference for your company which will be held on 10 October

2005. The following is the letter of confirmation you received from the Conference Centre. Read the letter and fax below, which gives details of the conference.

Then, using all information from the fax, write your letter to John Smith at the Nuffield Conference

Centre, explaining the changes to the arrangements. Do not include postal addresses.

Write 120-140 words on separate sheet.

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Today your Production Manager has sent you the fax below with changes he would like to make to the conference arrangements

注意：1 不要跑题 2 适当发挥 3 目标读者 4 不要抄袭 三种对策： a 换句型

e.g. 肯定句变否定句) b 换同义词

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e.g. put forward by these two authors are nearly．．．．．expressed by the two writers are almost．．．．c 改词性

e.g. The English language has had a major impact on developing other world languages.

Other world languages have been greatly affected by the English language in their developments.

商务报告类

【例题】

You recently attended a one-day course on office management. Below is the course programme,

with the comments you wrote on it.

Write a short report about the course for your Manager. Include all your comments and say whether

your company should send other staff on this course. Write 120-140 words. Write on your Answer Sheet. Do not write in capital letters.

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第二讲 BEC写作的语言、语法、组织和文体

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评分五个方面：

1 content 2 language

3 structure & vocabulary 4 organisation

展开论述上面的5个方面 1 内容的完整性 2 语言 6C原则

1．准确(correctness)

包括四层意义，即阅读人能理解、接受的英语水平；使用精确措词，传达准确信息；正确地使用语法和标点符号；拼写正确。 (1)恰当的语言风格

(2)准确的措词和信息

下面列出的是一系列极易混淆的单词及词组，请注意区分： a lot / allot

all right / alright cannot / can not

different from / different than . due to / because of effect / affect fewer / less

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lie / lay

principal / principle that /which

their / them / they' re wait for / wait on who / whom

(3)正确的语法和标点符号 (4)正确的拼写