2016届高考英语短文改错集训(2)及答案解析

2016高考英语-短文改错集训（二）

【专项突破】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Passage 1

Last month, the 18 Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school. Luckily, the Students’ Union organize an English Speech Competition. At first I didn’t show some interest and wasn’t very much confident. Then my English teacher Mr. Smith encouraged me. Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it. Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn. Glancing at my teacher’s smiling face, I built up my confidence. Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner. But my teacher’s encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first prize. I’m proud of Mr. Smith or the wonderful experience.

Passage 2

As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited. Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night. A car hit a motorbike. The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital. After a while, the traffic police came. Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth. The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control. At last he was taken to the police station. All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.

Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously. It thoften causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu. It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.

Passage 3

Dear Sir/Madam,

I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service. A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency. I found a little differences between your advertisement and action. As you say, you will provide a large

air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner. Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand. We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower. In fact, we only bathe in cold water. As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time. As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen. We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.

Passage 4

As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics. Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games. One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily. In other words, they help to keep people strong and health. If people are playing games, they move a lot of. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports by watch others play. So that is why sports are good activities for people’s health.

Passage 5

Last Sunday I went shopping with my father. We have a lot of things to buy. We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop. An hour late, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door. So we asked the policeman for help. It was glad to help us. A few minute later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angrily. ‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car. What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.

Passage 6

Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season. Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据）.When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to

search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.

Passage 7

Changes create happiness. Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．

2016高考英语-短文改错集训（二）答案与解析

Passage 1

本文是一篇励志小故事。讲述了作者(一位中学生)参加了本校一年一度的英语口语演讲比赛。当初，作者由于缺乏兴趣和自信而不敢参加，因受自己的英语老师的开导和激励，便报了名，但经过自己的一番努力后，最终以第一名的好成绩赢得了这场比赛。

http://doc.guandang.netanize→organized。考查动词时态的用法。句子Last month, the 18 Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school. Luckily, the Students’ Union organize an English Speech Competition中的谓语动词organize，其动作时间应与作者参赛的时间取得一致，故用一般过去时。

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