如何写好读写任务的扩展句

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如何写好扩展句在写好主题句之后，我们还要通过各种方式 展开主题，使文章饱满，有血有肉。 扩展句的要求： 1)扩展句所选择的内容要紧紧围绕主题句， 前后不能矛盾。 2)扩展句之间意思要连贯，过渡要自然。

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扩展句主要方式(1)说明原因 (5)说明结果

(2)阐明理由(3)逐条列举 (4)细化主题

(6)叙述经历(7)举例证明

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(1)说明原因 如：你读完这个故事(目标的重要性) 的感受 (感受)I was deeply inspired by such a story , (原因) as it makes me realize the power of a goal in shaping one's success and gives me strength to pursue my goal, despite the hardships I am to go through.

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(2)阐明理由如：你认为父母是否该对孩子养成良好 习惯负责(观点)As far as I am concerned, parents should be responsible for helping children (理由) The reasons are develop good habits. as follows. First, it is commonly held that parents are the first teachers of their children. Second, parents' duties include not only providing food and clothing, but also knowledge and common sense required to go on well in society.

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(3)逐条列举如：你对留堂制度的看法 (主题)In my opinion, detention has its advantages in educating misbehaved students. (列举)For one thing, with the detention policy, we students will learn that we should be responsible for our behavior. For another, the policy can make us finish our homework on time, which is good for our academic progress.

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(4)细化主题如：你对考试作弊的看法 (主题)In my opinion, this phenomenon will have a very bad effect on middle school students' study habit. (细化)Those who often cheat in exams will never treat study seriously again because they believe they will always get good marks without working hard. Those who never cheat in exams will consider it's unfair for them, thinking studying hard is not necessary.

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(5)说明结果如：你对国家“禁止商场免费提供塑料袋” 的看法 (主题) I think it very necessary for the government to forbid shops from offering free plastic bags. (结果) With this ban, shopping customers would gradually form a habit of bringing environmentally-friendly bags with them so that the consumption of plastic bags would be greatly reduced.

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(6)叙述经历如：你或你同学的留堂经历

(引出经历)This reminds me of my friend Li Hua's experience in primary school.(叙述经过)One day, he was talking with another classmate in class although the teacher had warned him several times. As a result, he had to stay for an extra hour after school.

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(6)叙述经历如：以你自己或他人成长的某次经历，说明父母过度照顾 对子女的影响(引出经历)It reminds me of an experience in my growth. (叙述经过) When I graduated from middle school, I participated in a summer camp, which required me to go to a mountain far away

from my home for a few days. During the camp, I found myself a failure in dealing with the ordinary things such as putting up my camp and lighting the fire. This is because my parents always did everything for me in the past. (结论) It dawned on me that my parents’ overprotection had weakened my ability to cope with some incidents.

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(7)举例证明如：以你自己或他人成长的某次经历，说明父母 过度照顾对子女的影响(2010年广一模)

(主题) As is apparently known to us all,overparenting has a bad effect on children’s growth, which even leads to their future failure.

(举例) Take my classmate Julie for example. Asthe only child in her family, she isn’t allowed to do anything except study. When she boarded in high school, except study, she knew nothing, for example, how to take care of her daily life and how to adapt to the new school life for a long time.

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扩展句主要方式(1)说明原因 (5)说明结果

(2)阐明理由(3)逐条列举 (4)细化主题

(6)叙述经历(7)举例证明

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练习：完成下列扩展句

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1)你对失败的看法或态度 (看法或态度)In my opinion,we should take an active attitude towards because most of us failure(说明原因) experience failure before we can finally succeed.

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2)你是否支持该校长惩罚学生的做法 (观点)I believe the headmaster is right to suspend those misbehaving students' class. (阐明理由) For one thing, if these misbehaving students are allowed to stay in class, they will negatively affect other students' learning. For another, if they are removed from the class, not only the others can learn in peace, but they also can have time to learn their lessons and then behave better when they return.

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3)谈谈学校里的浪费现象 (主题)We can see such kind of behavior

around us every day.(逐条列举) Forexample, when we leave the classroom, we

just ignore the lights and leave them on. When we have dinners, we often use tbe throwaway chopsticks and plastic bags. When we finish some drinks and food, we throw the leftover very casually.

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4)互联网给人们生活带来的影响

(主题句)Surfing the Internet does affect people's life.(细化主题) The Internet not only provides people with amounts of latest information, but also changes the way people communicate with each other. Besides, the Internet enables people to go shopping at home easily and conveniently. 提供最新信息； 改变交流方式； 网上购物，方便快捷

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5)就“如何看待外貌”发表看法 (主题句)In my opinion, what makes a person beautiful is his attractive personality rather than his physical appearance.(举例 证明) For example, Li Ming, my classmate, is the most popular one in our class though he is not handsome. That is because he often gives others a hand when they are in trouble. (结论) Therefore, I think the physical appearance is not so i

mportant as the attractive personality.

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Remember(1)说明原因 (5)说明结果

(2)阐明理由(3)逐条列举 (4)细化主题

(6)叙述经历(7)举例证明