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北京导航2011年考研英语强化讲义（写作）—郑景婷

address. (10 points)

3. 2006 Directions: You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate. You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.

Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your name at the end of the letter; use Li Ming instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points) 4. 2007 Directions:

5. 2008 Directions:

You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to 1) make an apology, and

2) suggest a solution.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use ―Li Ming‖ instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)

Range Finders Sample 1

January 17th, 2008

Dear Bob,

I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed it last week. Yesterday I have just come back from Canada and I found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.

The CD which I borrowed from you is made in Canada, So I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about you buy another CD and I pay for it? If you cannot find the similar one, I would send it through post office. And there are some solutions you like, please tell me.

I am sorry again for my behavior. Look forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

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Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use ―Li Ming‖ instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)

北京导航2011年考研英语强化讲义（写作）—郑景婷

Li Ming

9分

很好地完成了试题规定的任务。内容要点完整, 层次清晰, 语言流畅, 格式恰当符合语域要求。但也有一定的语法错误。如: How about you buy another CD. Yesterday I have just come back from Canada。

Sample 2

January 17th, 2008

Dear Bob,

I‘m writing this letter to extend my terrible sorry that I forgot to return a music CD to you. When I was packing my luggage, I remembered that I had brought it out and had put it on a book. But my friend, Lihua, who thought it was mine, put it into my suitcase. When I told Lihua this situation, Lhua was terribly regretful because of this.

So, I plan to send it to you as soon as possible. Please accept my sincere apology because of inconvenience caused.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

8分

较好地完成了试题规定的任务。内容要点及层次清晰, 组织严宻。但某些语言表达不够准确。如: I remembered that I had brought it out and had put it on a book意思不够准确。 Sample 3

January 17th, 2008

Dear Bob,

I‘m writing this letter to express my apology to you. I was so careless that get your music CD in my bag. I find it until I get arrive at China.

I have tell my friend who is living in Canada, and let him buy a new one for you. If you only want to get this one, I will sent it to you by post.

I am verry sorry for any inconvenience that I have caused. Please accept my sincere apologiance againe.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

6分

基本完成了试题规定的任务。内容中包含了基本要点且层次较清晰。但有一些语法及词汇拼写错误。如：I was so careless that get your music CD. I will sent it to you by post Please accept my sincere apologiance againe。 Sample 4

January 17th, 2008

Dear Bob,

I‘m so sorry and writing for your excuse involving the matter that I found your favorate

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北京导航2011年考研英语强化讲义（写作）—郑景婷

music CD in my luggage. When I come back China from Canada.

You were so kind of lending me the Westlife‘s CD, when you knew that Iwas one of fans of this popular Band. But So careless I was that I forgot to return you.

I have delivered it to you by EMS with another Westlife‘s CD together as an apology. I hope you can like it and our friendship will not be injuried by my facultyies.

Yours Truly

Li Ming

4分

未能完成试题规定的任务。内容要点不够明确, 语言表达欠规范, 并且有较多语法和用词错误。如：I’m so sorry and writing for your excuse involving the matter that I found your favorate music CD?; I have delivered it?。 Sample 5

Dear Bob,

I‘m so sorry that I forget to return The Denglijun‘ CD to you. I‘ll take it for you in the next time. bye!

Yours: Li Ming 2008, 1. 19 airport 1分

未能完成试题规定的任务。所用语言太少, 无法传达内容信息。

6. 2009

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