高中短文改错训练(附答案)

一

In England, nobody under 18 are allowed to drink in a bar. Mr Thompson used to going to a bar near his house, or he never took his son, Tom, because he was too young.

Then when Tom had his eighteen birthday, Mr Thompson took him to his usual bar. After drinking at half an hour, Mr Thompson said to his son,‖ Tom, I want to teach you an useful lesson. Your must always be careful never drink too much.‖ ―How do you know how you‘ve had enough?‖ asked Tom.

―Do you see those two lights at the end of the bar? When it seem to have become four, you‘ve had enough and should go to home.‖

― But, Dad, I can see only one,‖ said Tom.

答案

1. are—is 2. going --- go 3. or ---- but 4. eighteen ---- eighteenth

5. at ---for 6. an --- a 7. drink前加 to 8. how --- when

9. it --- they 10. 去掉 to

二

Dear Grandpa,

Thank you for your letter.

My school is organizing a basketball team and there‘s just a chance which I can

join in. I‘m little of course, but terribly quick and bravely. While the others are jumping about in the air, I ran under my legs and get the ball. It will be lots of fun for practicing out on the playground in the afternoon with the tree around us all red and yellow and everybody laughing and shout. These are the happier girls I‘ve ever seen and I‘m the happiest in all!

I mean to write long letter and tell you all the things I‘m doing at school, but the bell was ringing, so I just have to stop here.

1. which –that 2. bravely – brave 3. my --- their 4. 去掉for

5. tree --- trees 6. shouting 7. happier --- happiest 8. in – of

9. long 前加a 10. was --- is

三

Chinese students celebrate their birthday in different ways, and the most common way is to hold a birthday party, on which friends together to have a fun drinking, singing, and dancing. On the birthday, one usually accepts nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes parents will prepare for a specal dinner or a cake to show their love for their children. However, most children are looking forward to spending their own birthdays and enjoy themelves.

Though birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one‘ life, it can be done in some more meaningful way. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers. Only in this way we express thanks to our parents in return for their love and care.

答案

1. and --- but 2. on --- at 3. 去掉a 4. accepts --- receives

5. 去掉for 6. However --- Therefore 7. enjoy ---enjoying

8. Though --- As/ Since 9. way ---ways 10. we 后加can

四

As is known to all that millions of graduates crowded into the job market each year. But because of the finacial crisis, the situation of the employment has become very serious. Consider this, some people suggest graduates should have a lower career expectation, such as working in the western area of China. I in favor of this idea. Firstly, compared with the big cities, the competion is not as fierce there, but graduates can easy get a job. Secondly, the lower position may offer graduate more space. All in all, going to the west maybe bring more benefits. Devote yourself to the west, for it is both good for our personal development and for our country at present. 答案

1. As --- It 2. crowded ---- crowd 3. But --- And

4. consider --- considering 5. I 后加am 6. but ---so

7. easy --- easily 8. graduate – graduates 9.bring --- brings

10. our – your

五

Dear editor,

Although, I‘m 16 years old, my father still treat me as a careless children. He doesn‘t value my opinions. He is very strict to me and often punish me for leaving things lie around in the house while he does this all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to follow it. But he often says:‖Do as I say, not as I do.‖ Even bad, he points out my past mistakes to guests, making myself feel hurt. I love my father, but I can‘t bear that he does. I had tried many times to talk with him but he never listens. Please, help me.

参考答案

1. children – child 2. to --- with 3. punish --- punishes

4. lie --- lying 5. all后加the 6. 取得follow 7. bad --- worse

8. myself --- me 9. that --- what 10. had --- have

六

First, I d like to thank you for your reminding, although I don‘t agree with your view which students should spend more time on their lessons instead of read novels. Indeed, reading novels takes up some of the time that should spent on lessons, but it‘ll make us know that hard life is. Besides, by reading novels we can gain what we can‘t learn from our textbook. Of course, reading novels has it‘s shortcomings. Novels that have wrong ideas will make us to do something wrong. Maybe, in your eyes, the disadvantages of reading novels outweighs the advantages. And in my opinion, reading novels is just as another pair of eyes, which broadens my horizon.

参考答案

1. which --- that 2. read --- reading 3. spent前加be

4. what --- how 5. textbook --- textbooks 6. it‘s – its 7. 去掉to

8. outweighs --- outweigh 9. And – But 10. as – like