高中英语写作技巧方法

高中英语写作技巧方法

基础写作训练

高中英语写作技巧方法

一. 基础写作基本要求I. 基础写作考我们什么能力? A. 信息处理或整理的能力;[如:信息之间 能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后顺序等] B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确 性和合适性] C. 连句成文能力;[信息内容的完整性和连贯性]

高中英语写作技巧方法

A. 如何处理或整理信息? 1. 存在问题

(1) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists, especially to the older people…. 错误诊断：总体信息和细节信息不能合并 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. First of all, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists, especially to the older people. …

高中英语写作技巧方法

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高中英语写作技巧方法

高中英语写作技巧方法

The Benefit of Reading Books 1. 世人都说金银好，而我认为读书才 是无价宝。 2. 读书使人充实、完美，知识使社会 进步。 3. 要坚持活到老，学到老。

高中英语写作技巧方法

Some people say that money is the best thing in the world. But I consider(think) reading books as the best and the most precious thing one can ever have.

高中英语写作技巧方法

Reading books is very important. First of all, it is knowledge that makes society develop and by reading books you can get all kinds of knowledge. Furthermore, reading books makes you a qualified person and makes your life enjoyable.

高中英语写作技巧方法

One is never too old to learn. No matter what time you realize the importance of reading books, you can enjoy it during the rest of your life time. Love books, for they are your best friends.

高中英语写作技巧方法

总体信息(主题句) For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

高中英语写作技巧方法

(2) However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us. Quite a few of us had to buy extra food. 错误诊断：因果关系的信息合并 However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food. (He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.)

高中英语写作技巧方法

(3) I am quite satisfied with the travel agency, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic, he could concern old men in our group. 错误诊断： ‘‘一逗到底”的中式英语表达导 致信息表达出现问题，不能用多个简单句表达 多个不同类型的信息内容。 I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old men in our group.

高中英语写作技巧方法

II. 如何处理或整理信息? 一、按信息内容或逻辑关系分为五大信息块； who what why when where 二、一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达； 三、信息之间如果存在逻辑关系就应该合并， 但如果它们之间没有逻辑关系就不能

随便 合并。 四、总体信息和细节信息不能合并； 五、要正确使用标点符号避免影响信息的正确 表达

高中英语写作技巧方法

B. 组词造句能力;[如内容和语言表达的准确性和 合适性] 1. 旅行社 travel agency 2. 食物不合味口 the food didn’t agree with us 3. 他讲解清晰,生动。 He explained everything about the places in a clear and lively way. His explanation about those places of interest was very clear and vivid.

高中英语写作技巧方法

4. 货真价实的购物场所 the shops where we could buy good bargains the shops where we could buy nice things with reasonable prices

高中英语写作技巧方法

错句修正

1. 我表示对旅行社提供的服务总体感到满意。 travel agency. I am quite satisfied with the travelling company. I am quite satisfied with the traveleragency. travel centre. 2.当地导游对游客非常热情，体贴，耐心照顾团中 的老人。 John, who was the travel leader, was get along with everybody and he was took good care of the older.

The local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists,especially to the older people.

高中英语写作技巧方法

3.导游对游地讲解清晰、生动，增长了我们的见 闻。 The interview of the view is clear and funny and it’s clearly that we improve knowledge for John’s direction.

The local tour guide explained everything about the places we visited in a clear and lively way, which helped us broaden our horizons.

高中英语写作技巧方法

4. 饭馆提供的膳食不合口味。 我们有些人不得不自买食物。 The diet provided in the restaurant didn’t fit us so many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food.

However, the food provided in the restaurant didn’t agree with many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food.

高中英语写作技巧方法

5.建议应该多提供货真价实的购物场所。 I suggest you can offer more and more shops.

we wanted to be taken to the shops where we could buy good bargains but were not.