英语作文万能论据(3)

can't be neglected: Thecontaminated air may damage people's health; the polluted water could poisoncreatures living in the water; soil

contamination ,resulting from the over useof chemical fertilizers and pesticides, is anther major hazard to people'shealth. (91 words)

How: On the one hand, the authoritiesshould make and implement relevant laws and regulations to impose a heavypenalty on those who destroy and contaminate the environment deliberately. Onthe other hand, factories should act to reduce the emission of pollutants byusing purification systems. Last but not least, we, as individual earthcitizens, should take practical actions, such as using cloth bags, reducing theuse of vehicles and so on. Only in this way can we live in a better world. (86words)

补充：环境和经济发展精彩段落

Our livingenvironment and some natural resources are being destroyed in the blind pursuitof GDP increase. At present, the ecology of our planet can hardly support thecontinuous expansion of heavy-polluting , high-consuming and low-profitproduction pattern. What's more, it is quite necessary that we have anobjective understanding of the relationship between GDP increase and theecological environment. The GDP increase which is achieved at the expense ofhuman living environment and destroying our valuable natural resources (some ofthe resources are nonrenewable) is meaningless at all. To sum up, the blind crazefor GDP increase must be stopped.(101 words)

2.节约资源问题

Causes： Firstly，theever-increasing population is a leading cause of water shortage. As populationsincrease, the demand for water grows accordingly。secondly,people everywhere waste water without even

realizing it: showers last too long， taps are left running and so forth. Last but not least, theindustrial production will cause water

contamination and it will also decreasethe existing water resources further more. How : In view of the seriousness of theproblem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. For onething, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out and enforcedimpose a heavy penalty on those who waste or contaminate waster deliberately .Secondly, a large-scale education campaign should be launched to inform thepublic of the

significance of economizing on water. With these measures taken,it is

reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved inthe near future .

补充：

water shortage isstill a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the wholehuman being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be foundanywhere in our daily life. For example, water taps are frequently left on bycareless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste waterbecause they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, soprecious is water that we cannot afford to waste it. Water resource isindispensable not only in our daily life but also in the industry andagriculture. And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard toimagine what the world would be like when there is no more water.

Even though anincreasing number of people have become aware of this emergency, furthermeasures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole world shouldmake a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level,publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to savewater on TV and other media, should be conducted. To store water means to storehappiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring.

写作格式错误主要包括以下几个方面：题目的写法、文章的格式、大小写以及标点符号等四个方面。下面我分别加以说明。 一、题目的写法

在考研作文中，大作文的写作（包括英一和英二）类型是不需要题目的，只有一些小作文也就是应英文写作（例如：报告、备忘录、告示、失物招领等）是需要题目的。因为题目是首先映入读者眼帘的，所以要注意题目的书写位置。一定要在试卷作文纸上的上方中间位置书写。同时还应在话题和正文之间留出一定的距离，即比正文行距稍宽一些。

其次，要注意题目的大小写，实词的首字母一定要大写。其它虚词如冠词、连词（但如连词的字母多于5个时则大写)和介词首字母不需要大写。比如： 例1

误：Attitudes Toward Money 正：Attitudes toward Money 二、文章的格式

(1)四边留空：卷面的四边一定要留出适当的空白。这样的文章才能整齐、美观，给人以清晰、明快的感觉。 (2)空格：文章的每段的首行一定要有统一的空格（一般缩进4-6个字节）。 三、大小写方面的错误

在考研文章的评改过程中，有关大小写方面的错误层出不穷，这是考生的一个弱点。一般来说，大写规则有以下几条：

(1)大写每句话的第一个字母和直接引语的第一字母,如：

He said,”He is going to Shanghai next week”. (2)大写专有名词，或用作专有名词的部分普通名词，通常是缩略形式。如：

Dr G . G . East

(3)大写缩写字母。如：MPA ,MBA ,BBC (4)文章标题要大写。

(5)头衔在专有名词前要大写，在专有名词后就小写。例如：Captain Smith --------Smith, the captain；Uncle George--------George ,my uncle 四、标点符号错误及分析 考生在写文章时，一定要注意正确使用标点符号，切忌从头到尾只用逗号的现象。一定要熟练掌握常用标点符号的基本用法，尤其要正确使用逗号和分号。 【推荐信】

简介：结构要点推荐信是向收信人推荐某人做某事的信件。 写作“三步走”：

1.指出被推荐的人及推荐的原因； 2.介绍被推荐人的情况；

3.总结说明被推荐人值得被推荐(例如能胜任工作)。

注意：推荐信应多写被推荐人的优点，肯定其成绩。但内容应真实可信，语言热情得体。切忌夸大其实。 模板句型：

第一部分：指出被推荐人

I am writing to you to recommend…for…

I take great pleasure in recommending to you … as …

I would like to present… for your consideration in your search for… With reference to your requirements, I shall, without reservation, recommend…as an ideal candidate. 第二部分：介绍被推荐人的情况 He/She is …… 此处隐藏：4184字，全部文档内容请下载后查看。喜欢就下载吧 ……