2022版高考英语二轮复习专题限时集训24短文改错(Ⅰ)(含解析)

专题限时集训(二十四) 短文改错(Ⅰ)

A

(2018·福州市模拟)When asking what I would like to send to the poor children living in the mountain villages ，I think of books.

On the one hand ，the children there are eager to gain knowledges ，but they are too poor to go to school.For this reason ，I hope we will love the books.On the other hand ，I think everyone have the right to education and it is of great important to help those people who need it.My books will give them not wisdom but also happiness.I bet that I will be pleasure to see those children's smile faces in the sunshine after accepting the presents.As a old saying goes ，“There is kindness to be found everywhere.” Let's to give presents to people whom we love or who n eed help.

【答案】

When asking asked

what I would like to send to the poor children living in the mountain villages ，I think of books.

On the one hand ，the children there are eager to gain knowledges knowledge

，but they are too poor to go to school.For this reason ，I hope

we they will love the books.On the other hand ，I think everyone have has

the right to education and it is of great important importance

to help those people who need it.My books will give them not ∧only wisdom but also happiness.I bet that I will be pleasure pleased to see those children's smile smiling

faces in the sunshine after accepting the presents.As a an

old saying goes ，“There is kindness to be f ound everywhere.” Let's to ﹨ give presents to people whom we love or who need help.

B

(2018·牡丹江市模拟)I'm writing to tell you something about e-hongbao ，what is becoming popular in China.E-hongbao is actually a kind of lucky money from and to relatives and friends during festivals or in special occasions.For many young people ，grabbing e-hongbao on their mobile phones are a fairly common and excited activity.Unlike the tradition of elders give lucky money to children ，over half of the people sending e-hongbao are in 20s.It's just for a fun or giving best wishes ，so the sum of money matters little.In a word ，e-hongbao is bringing new color to the old tradition.

Therefore ，I'm concerned about the safe of on-line payment.So rules and

regulations needed to be improved regarding the e-hongbao system to guarantee its operation.

【答案】

I'm writing to tell you something about e-hongbao ，what which

is becoming popular in China.E-hongbao is actually a kind of lucky money from and to relatives and friends

during festivals or in on

special occasions.For many young people ，grabbing e-hongbao on their mobile phones are is a fairly common and excited exciting

activity.Unlike the tradition of elders give giving

lucky money to children ，over half of the people sending e-hongbao are in ∧their 20s.It's just for a ﹨ fun or giving best wishes ，so the sum

of money matters little.In a word ，e-hongbao is bringing new color to the old tradition.

Therefore However ，I'm concerned about the safe safety

of on-line payment.So rules and regulations needed need

to be improved regarding the e-hongbao system to guarantee its operation.

C

(2018·泰安市模拟)Last week ，my friends invited me go camping to see the sunrise.I felt so exciting and asked for my parents' permission.Luckily ，he agreed.We got to the mountain top that we would stay for a whole night.We were singing together while one of my friends were playing the guitar.The next morning ，we wake up at about five o'clock.We could not wait to see the sun to come up.After a while ，we saw the red color light up the sky gradual.It was so amazing scenery.The beauty in nature impressed me at that moment.

【答案】

Last week ，my friends invited me ∧to go camping to see the sunrise.I felt so

exciting excited and asked for my parents' permission.Luckily ，he they

agreed.We got to the mountain top that where

we would stay for a whole night.We were singing together while one of my friends were was playing the guitar.The next morning ，we wake woke

up at about five o'clock.We could not wait to see the sun to ﹨ come up.After a while ，we saw the red

color light up the sky gradual gradually .It was so such amazing scenery.The beauty in of

nature impressed me at that moment.

D

(2018·珠海市模拟)This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank.An old man was counting his money in front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.To make things bad ，his money was lying in all direction.At once the people around rush to pick the money up ，while the old man stood there ，not know what to do.Surprisingly ，everyone gave back the money they had just picked.The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed.To my great joy ，there are now a lot of nice people in your life.It's true what honesty is more important than money!

【答案】

This morning on my way to school I was deep deeply

moved by what I saw outside a bank.An old man was counting his money in the ﹨ front of the bank.Suddenly a young

man came running and knocked him down.To make things bad worse

，his money was lying in all any /direction directions .At once the people around rush rushed

to pick the money up ，while the old man stood there ，not know knowing

what to do.Surprisingly ，everyone gave back the money they had just picked ∧up .The old man counted the money again and found that not a

single bill was missed missing/lost

.To my great joy ，there are now a lot of nice people in your our life.It's true what that

honesty is more important than money!