2013雅思强化写作课程_S7_混合图形写作_[兼容模式]

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IELTS

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Notice :

it will takes 4 hours in Normal speed.

本课件内容1对1（6分水平学员）执行时讲解为教师们的平均课时为4小时；强化课程内容习题老师浏览（课件学员

自学）

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各种TASK1考题基本结构（1）

序序列

多条简Cam7起点

单曲线-53

多柱图转化为起点

曲线混合图双图关单饼/

系单柱

变化YESYES曲线/

多柱

对比YESYESYES

conclusion总趋势总趋势曲线趋势+序列最大值

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各种TASK1考题基本结构（2）

序列

双饼图

变化

最末段

总趋势转化为曲左边单饼YES

线（右单饼）

YES

总趋势（

+正相关）潜在规律

table 转化为曲起点of 线changes

static maybetable

分组,比较

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地图，流程流程图

Flow chartstagesMaps of

changes

NO

changesh

NO

CComparisoni

Layout changes

comparis

on

Maps of featurescomparison

Maps of choosing

features

comparison

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Major diagrams type of TASK1

Mix graphsMi h混合合图

形写作作

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Writing Task 1-cam4-P100

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below Gives information about travel to and from the UK, and ,

about the most popular countries from UK residence to visit

Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information given in the graph.

You should write at least 150 words

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Vistors to and from the UK

60

50millions403020100

19791984198919941999

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Most popular countries visited by UK residents 1999

TurkeyGGreece

USASpainFrance

051015

millions of UK visitors

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Mixed diagrams

1st = introduction1st introduction（the first chart indicates…. And the second graph presentspresents……）

independently

idindependently dtl

4th=correlation between the two diagrams

g,g，Combining A with B, relating B back to A

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简单双Curves写作技巧

目前考试：双curves 是主流，单线几乎

存在不存在

Double curves: Dbl

change + between A and B

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Vistors to and from the UK

60

50milli

ons403020100

19791984198919941999

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TEST 4, WRITING TASK 1 考官评语

This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 5 score. Here is the examiner's comment:

The response is under-length (138 words).The

pycandidate reports the key information in the first

graphi.e that visits to and from the UK increased and that the increase in visits from the UK was more marked thanthat of visits to the country. that of visits to the country In the bar chart the information is also reported

yaccurately.

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However, the references to &dollar are confusing, suggesting that the suggesting that the candidate has not fully understood th ifthe information given, ti i and there is d th i little attempt to relate the two diagrams or to make comparisons across the information given.

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There is a brief introduction to the topic, with an attempt to paraphrase the rubric, the overall structure of the writing is clear, with some use of basic discourse markers.There is very little use of reference, however, resulting in a

considerable amount of repetition of key vocabulary.

There is a fairly narrow range of sentence types and errors occur in verb formation and in the use of tenses.

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Band score:Bandscore:TF=4

5

①The response is under-length(138 words);②The candidate reports the Thecandidatereportsthein the first inthefirst

graph i.e that visits to and from the UK increased and that the increase in visits from the UK was more marked than

ovssoecouy.;ebcethat of visits to the country. ; In the bar chart theinformation is also reported accurately.

③However, the references to &dollar are confusing,

suggesting that the candidate has not fully understood the gggyinformation given, ④and there is little attempt to relate the

tditwo diagramsor to make comparisonsacross the

information given.

CC = 65CC = 6.5VSS4VSS=4

①ThereThere is a brief introduction to the topic, with an attempt isabriefintroductiontothetopic,withanattemptto paraphrase the rubric, the overall structure of the

writing is clear, with some use of basic discourse markers. ①ThereThere is very isverylittle use of referencelittleuseofreference, however, resulting in howeverresultingin

a considerable amount of repetition of key vocabulary.②There is a fairly narrow range of sentence typesand errorsoccurinverbformationandintheuseoftenses