[专项提升]短文改错做题思路与方法训练二(附解析)02

02 短文改错口诀：

修改不过八，一删一增加。涉及各种词，得分人人夸。 一句一句查，主要查语法。考点心中记，改正按方法。

Well, the first place I suggest that you visited is the Great Wall, the longest wall in the world, which is said to be one of the wonders in the world. It has a history of less than twentieth centuries. It is amazed to see such a huge wall was made entirely with hand.

The other place worth visiting was the Palace Museum, which built in 1406. Twenty-four emperors once more lived there, which the ruling emperors issued orders. You can learn a lot about Chinese history by visiting this Palace.

What a pity that you can't stay longer, otherwise, you could visit many other historic places and beautiful scenes such as the Summer Palace, a Beihai Park and so on.

答案解析与解题点拨：

1. suggest后面的宾语从句中用should加动词原形作谓语，should可以省略，只用动词原形，所以把visited改成visit。

2. 此句要表达的是“长城有二十个世纪的历史了”，根据常识，长城已经有两千多年的历史了，所以把less改成more。

3. 根据上一句提供的句意，长城的历史不是“第二十个世纪”，而是“二十个世纪”，所以把twentieth改成twenty。

4. It在此处是表示事情的形式主语，所以用动词的ing形式表示“令人 的”，故把amazed该车amazing。

5. 此处hand属于抽象用法，其前用by表示“手工”，故把with改成by。 6. 根据上下文的语境，词句是表达现在的，所以把was改成is。

7. 句中which代替的是物，和built之间是动宾关系，应该用被动语态表达，所以在which和built之间加was。

8. 词句语境是“二十四位皇帝曾经在那里居住”，而once more是“又一次”的意思，显然和语境不符，所以去掉more。

9. 此处定语从句的引导词在定语从句中作状语，代替there，表示地点。引导词应该用关系副词，所以把which改为where。

10. Beihai Park是含有普通名词的专有名词，所以其前要用定冠词the，所以把a改为the。

∧built in 1406. Twenty-four emperors visiting this Palace.

What a pity that you can't stay longer, otherwise, you could visit many other historic places and beautiful scenes such as the Summer Palace, a Beihai Park and so on.