2019年中考英语：专题(18)连词成句试题专项讲解附练习（全国通用(5)

If we see someone fall into the water, we shouldsave him in a perpor way . For example , we can shout loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help him.

Life is valuable . We should take it seriously. We must remember that safety should always come first while swimming.

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。如提建议的句式：In my opinion, we shouldn’t go…, we had better not swim….条件状语从句等。

【考点定位】提纲类作文。

3. 【2015年安徽省初中毕业学业考试英语试题】书面表达（共1小题，满分25分）

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思，请根据下列提示回一封电子邮件。

● 点赞（Dianzan）：赞同、喜爱 ● 任性（Renxing）：随心所欲 ● 秒杀（Miaosha）：快速达到目的 ● 土豪（Tuhao）：很富有 ● 。。。。。。 注意：1. 词数80-100；

2. 请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；

4. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter,

As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.

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All the best!

Yours, Li Hua

【答案】 Dear Peter,

As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in China. Here are some example.

One of the most popular words is Dianzan,which is often used when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When you say somebody is Renxing,you mean that they will do whatever they like. The phrase Miaosha first came from online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping order before others. But now it’s widely used when you achieve your purpose in a very short time. If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.

You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning , you’ll know more about our language and culture. All the best!

Yours Li Hua

写作亮点：这篇短文语言无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。在具体的写作中句式丰富，如：定语从句which is often used when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing.，宾语从句; you mean that they will do whatever they like,条件状语从句: If you descibe somebody sa a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich.等。 【考点定位】话题作文。

4. 【广州市2015年初中毕业生学业考试英语】书面表达（共1题，满分15分） 你校将开设一些特色课程，学生可根据兴趣进行选择。请根据以下内容提示为学校英文网页写一篇短

文，介绍这些课程、提出你建议增设的课程并说明理由。

Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. …

注意：1. 参考词汇：模型制作 model making 2. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 【答案】

Students in our school are free to choose some special courses according to their interest. These courses will help students relax themselves after school. There are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making. Here is more information.

If you want to improve your oral English, English drama may be the first choice. It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills. If you are interested in football, take the football course. It is good for your physical health. Besides, you can learn more about teamwork. What about model making? You will be amazed by the science world and become interested in it.

For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much. I hope these courses would be helpful and each student would enjoy a bright and colorful school life here!

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文。短文中作者按照题目的要求给我们介绍了学校即将开设的三个特色课程的活动内容，又发挥想象力补充了第四个课程painting course,内容完整，要点全面，语句通顺，符合题目要求。短文中作者使用了正确的时态和人称，句式表达符合英语的规范。作者还使用了丰富的句型和句式，如here are many courses for them to choose, such as English drama, football, or model making、It is a good chance to practice not only oral English, but also performing skills.、Besides, you can learn more about teamwork、For my part, a painting course can be added, because students like drawing so much等。这些句型的使用从整体上提高了作文的档次，显示了作者较高的写作能力。

【考点定位】话题类作文。 ?考点归纳

中考试题中的书面表达形式相对比较固定，主要有四种：看图填空，看图作文，短小应用文（包括书信、日记、贺卡、留言、通知等）写作，命题作文。无论哪一种书面表达形式，通常都要求：紧扣题目，准确、全面地表达出要点中规定的全部信息和内容，不得遗漏；表达正确，意思连贯，过渡自然；格式正确，书写规范，标点准确，字数符合要求。 1．写作前要做好“两备”。捕捉信息，包括材料提示，写作要求、文体和词数等；列好提纲，把所写的内容理清思路，列成若干条，选好要用的人称、时态和词语。

2．写作中要做到“三要”。书写要规范认真；句子要多用熟悉的、符合英文习俗；不熟悉的词语要用同（近）义句替换。

3．写完后要做到“四查”。查内容是否符合题意、查句子是否流畅通顺、查语法是否有错误（包括时态、语态、单词拼写、大小写和标点等）、查词数是否符合要求。

【个案分析】假设你叫李磊，请你针对这封信的内容，给这位父亲写封回信，谈谈你的看法。要求：条例清楚，语义连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。词数80左右。

Dear editor,

I'm sorry to trouble you. I have a daughter. She is 13 years old. She likes making telephone calls. As soon as he gets back from school, she picks up the telephone and calls her classmates. She talks and talks, sometimes for 2 or 3 hours. We can't use it. I tell him not to do it, but she is unhappy. What should I do? A worried father 【步步点拨】

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