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Find the Reservation Road

If there are two lives that you can choose. One is a hasty, relatively short, but wonderful life, like Steve Jobs, and another one is an obscure but healthy and peaceful life. Which kind of life do you prefer? Maybe different people have different choices.

As the saying goes:”There may be another person smarter than you.”At Tsinghua University, we can always hear about all kinds of achievement of some outstanding figures like special awards winners, scientific figures, academic figures and so on. At the scene of special awards replying, every competitor shows their great talents at various fields. There is no doubt that they have madelots of efforts to reach the top. In 2012, the two sisters DonghanMa and DongxinMawho came from Tsinghua University were popular on the Internet. It originated from a schedule, which is filled with learning tasks and life plans. In this schedule, time was divided into many blocks, and even 15 minutes have been planned orderly. Some net friends said like “She is busier than state leaders.” or “I think it’s a waste of time to breathe deeply.”

As everyone knows,” there is no free lunch.” We fight all the ways for good jobs, money, satisfied partners and reputation. Sometimes, we just fight for the value of life. But what is valuable? Is it valuable to study all the time? Is it valuable to workhard? Or is it valuable tostay with parents and lookafter them? We can’t find an accurate answer. Some time ago,

there was a boy called HaoChen who passed away. He was bore with diseases, and the doctor said he can’t stay longer than 5 years. But he struggled with diseases and lived 20 years. In his short life, he read a lot, even createda record of reading 200 thousand words one day. He leaved many sentences which made us wide awake such as” The most fantastic things are not the things that can be praised randomly, but is the ordinary beings that smile even in difficult positions.” Although his thought has beyond than the contemporary, what he really wants is an ordinary life that he can run, go to school, stay with family and find a girlfriend.

The life style that we live in depends on our attitude to life. You can fight all the time in your life, or you can also live a peaceful life. Someone once said:” The way to release our pain is to find the reservation road.” We live in the word and we do everything to make us happy. All we need to do is to findthe reservation road, which is exclusive for you.

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评阅人：王钧莹