北京旅游英语作文(3)

I was taking her body temperature twice a day, ensuring that she was completely well. dad went back home safely and healthily on Saturday. what I had done to my mum, he, as well as my mum, beamed at me and really felt overjoyed and thrilled. Conceivably, taking care of my parents was, indeed and definitely, my mission and obligation.

2014年第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35

分）

你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往;

3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意：

1.词数不少于50.

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Chris,

_____________________________________________________________________________ Yours,

Joe考点：考察提纲类作文写作指导：

本文属于应用文中的书信，要求写信给英国朋友Chris说明取消计划的原因并建议推测旅行至8月份。以第一人称为主。要点：

1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;

2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往;

3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要

赋予变化。

【参考范文】

Dear Chris,

How is everything going?

I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left I’wish you could understand.

Yours, Joe

5 / 6

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊"英语园地"写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。

注意：1. 词数不少于 60.2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. 【参考范文】

There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.

I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions. a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.