高考英语作文“道歉信”万能模板(2)

　　I am writing to advise…

　　If I were you, I would…

　　第四部分：

　　希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复

　　套语：

　　1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).

　　我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。

　　2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).

　　我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。

　　3. Best wishes!

　　(给你)最美好的祝愿!

　　4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.

　　无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。

　　5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!

　　我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。

　　6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.

　　我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。

　　配套练习1

　　你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

　　1.你建议的线路;

　　2.你的理由;

　　3.你的祝愿。

　　注意：1.词数不少于50;

　　2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　【写作指导】

　　本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让 他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Jim,

　　I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.

　　Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.

　　Hope you’ll have a good time in China.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　配套练习2

　　学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容：

　　1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;

　　2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。

　　【写作指导】

　　这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴，这篇作文要求就校英语报改版是事情给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容： 1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由; 2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由，根据自己的建议选定栏目的设置并以邮件方式表达自己的观点。考生在写作过程中要确定切题且符合英语写作逻辑的篇章结构。确立邮件文体之后，要弄清要点，围绕要点展开，条理要清晰，理由要充分，关键的是在写作的过程中，要注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，文章尽量简洁，在文章中尽可能多地使用高大上的词汇，遵循短语优先原则在配以特殊句型和复合句的应用，让文章更上档次。

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’ve learned that our English Post is being reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one. I’m writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.

　　Needless to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students’ interest and have positive effects on their study and life.

　　Compared to the entertainment, I hold the view that the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important. The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life. Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life. In addition, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one’s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one’s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.

　　Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one hand, it covers one’s career development a great deal .On the other hand, it makes a great difference to one’s career success in the future. …… 此处隐藏：1581字，全部文档内容请下载后查看。喜欢就下载吧 ……